Many universities and colleges worldwide offer business studies. One major criticism of these is that they are too academic and not hands-on enough. In your opinion, what needs to be added to the curriculum to make the programs more practical?

Some academies and institutes global world propose

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programs. The most important issue about them is referring to how educational they are and not more practical. Since forever, the majority of the programs that universities and colleges offer to their

students

,

overall

, business studies, are extremely academic.

This

is not entirely dreadful, beginning with all the quality information and knowledge scholars are acquiring in these houses

and

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in addition

, I would like to mention that

this

guidance may be useful in order to organize a company or perhaps to commence one on their own. A great example of

this

,

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is all these amazing universities,

for instance

, Chile's University, which graduates a great number of

students

every year in

this

particular program and all of them are capable of having excellent

jobs

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opportunities.

Nonetheless

, ungraduated and

also

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postgraduate individuals need more than education, the real world is not as easy as academies and institutes say. In my opinion, these houses need to encourage their

students

to hard work and in order to accomplish

this

, different activities would

be needed

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to be added

onto

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the curriculum,

such

as,

to visit

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any company every year of their business program,

to have

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a part-time job in the half of the career-related to the major, among others. To illustrate

this

, I would say

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Toronto's University,

which

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permits their

students

to work 20 hours a day in order to obtain copious

of

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knowledge and experience for their lives.

To conclude

, academics and practices are extremely important and one needs to be attached to the other to achieve great majors and experiences that are meaningful in our lives.