You have been assigned to give a networking presentation with your colleague from a different office, who you met last year. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter: · Inform your colleague that you will be working together · Provide your initial ideas on the networking presentation · Ask for a time to meet and practice the presentation Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Ms. Petitto,
Dear Ms. Petitto,
I hope
this
message finds you well! I am excited to inform you that we have been assigned to work together on the upcoming networking presentation. It’s great to have the opportunity to collaborate with you again since we last
met last
year, and I am looking forward to combining our ideas and expertise.
As for the presentation, I was thinking we could focus on the importance of building meaningful connections in our industry, along with
strategies for effective networking. I believe we could also
incorporate some interactive elements to engage the audience and make the session more memorable. Additionally
, we could share some personal anecdotes from our networking experiences to illustrate key points.
To ensure we are well-prepared, I would love to find a time to meet and practice the presentation together. Please let me know your availability in the coming week so we can schedule a session that works for both of us.
Looking forward to working together!
Best regards,
Trang DaoSubmitted by minhtrang.dao on
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task achievement
Your letter could benefit from proposing specific dates or times for the meeting, as this would demonstrate more complete task achievement.
coherence cohesion
Consider using more transitional phrases to further enhance the flow of ideas.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are both very appropriate and well-structured.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is professional and friendly, which is ideal for a communication with a colleague.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite