Some people think that its is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, digital communication has made the world modern and totally online.
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modernity has brought universities possibilities for students to study through digital platforms, in spite of, the pandemic keeping people at home.
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, it is to do much easier, in some cases it makes people have less personal contact. In the essay, I will discuss both cases, based on my personal opinion.
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, the disadvantaged, mostly young students, do not get confidence. It is evident, that the "keyboard" makes public speaking more challenging.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • co-education
  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • gender stereotypes
  • discrimination
  • social skills
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
  • diversity
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