New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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, we witness a boom in the

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we use in our everyday lives.

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inventions have altered the way we live, especially that of children.

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while using

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despite its several advantages does outdo its disadvantages. On one hand, many parents argue that

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modern

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has its effects on their brain most of which are considered harmful. Lack of physical activity in a young one’s routine is not healthy, as his body requires movement for it to grow.

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, they fear that their child might develop a health condition like, obesity

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of sitting in a place for a long

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or might get addicted to the game even.

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, after a long day from school, leisure

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is something every kid looks forward to. Getting some

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off from the real world, and indulging in video games can prove to be a very good energizer to them. Research says that

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video games help shape a person’s mind and train them for real-life skills. Some of which can be, taking quick decisions, being able to think of long-term

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at hand and

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. They provide exposure to a

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brain to various aspects from a very young age, which is rendered beneficial.

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essay argued why spending

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on modern

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can be beneficial for a developing child, and should not be neglected. The vast exposure the modern

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provides, and the skills it inculcates should not be forsaken

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but seen as an extra-curricular.