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Many people think that the government should pay for the tuition fees of all adults who are interested in university studies. Do you agree or disagree?

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The diagram illustrates the manufacturing
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 of
cement
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 and concrete for construction intent. There are four stages to implement in the fabrication
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 in order to produce
cement
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.
To begin
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 with, crushing limestone and clay with the help of a crusher to acquire powder. In the
second
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 step, obtained powder blends into the mixer. The
third
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 one is heating the blended materials burn to a specific degree to produce a specific material at the end of the heating
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. The final
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 is grinding clinker and packaging. The step
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 used in the fabrication
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 of concrete is fewer than
cement
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 production. The
process
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 works by mixing materials according to the defined proportions. The
process
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 starts with blending
cement
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, water, sand and gravel into the concrete mixer at a determined time. The proportions are 15 per
cent
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cement
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, 10 per
cent
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 water, 25 per
cent
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 sand, and 50 per
cent
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 gravel.
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, the material, which can be used in the building
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, is produced.
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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