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Many student find it difficult to pay attention at school .what are the reasons for this ?what could be done to solve this problem ?

#student #attention #school
The past few years have seen a dramatic increase in the
numbers
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 of
students
 who are struggling to pay
attention
 at
school
. The goal of
this
 essay is to elaborate on the causes of
this
 dilemma in terms of physiological
factor
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 and
the
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electronics overuse and suggest two viable ways of improving
this
 solution. The primary reason is
physiological
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factor
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.
In other words
, there are many
students
suffer
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who suffer
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 from
Attention
 Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder (ADHD), which affects their ability to focus on their academic curriculum for more than
few
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a few
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 minutes.
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a round
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around
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 11
percent
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per cent
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 of the junior
school
students
 in the USA have been diagnosed
of
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 ADHD.
This
 responsibility lies with the government to offer
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treatment for those pupils. Hopefully, that decrease the number of people who has
this
 problem. The
second
 reason is
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electronics overuse.
That is
 to say, the majority of
students
 these days became fond of
electronics
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 devices
such
 as phones ,tablets and computers. They used to deal with it as an entertainment source,
instead
 of the main purposes of these gadgets.
For instance
 ,the
students
 sometimes spend the whole day with these devices without parental control and
this
affect
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 their ability to
pat
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pay
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attention
 at
school
. Parents must take the lead in dealing with
this
 issue by increasing the supervision of their children and limit the time of using these tools.
This
 solution could help them to concentrate on their study. Bottom line, the challenge of paying
attention
 at
school
 is a serious problem, which can be talked
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 efforts of the governments and the families .
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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