Fresh water has become a global concern for the world. What are the causes of it.? What measures government and individual should take to resolve the problem? Give reasons and examples for your answer.

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daily life. They are many reasons for
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crisis, what
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counter measures
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can be taken to solve
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as dumping waste material and rise in temperature and suggestions to tackle these problems.
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, It is undeniable that waste
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from industry
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introduced into
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bodies. In
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of
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companies
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rivers
and ponds nearby, which creates
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comtamination
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result
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cannot be used for drinking.
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over all
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drinking
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has decreased to 20
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in the past decade, which are located near
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.
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, the rise in temperature
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has a major impact on
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liquids
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hike in heat the
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groundwater
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water
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evaporates and,
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, reduced
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liquids crisis of
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example
, according to one research, around 6percentage of
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turns to vapour due to increased temperatures.
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, government and people play a certain
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problem
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State
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should conduct some
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awareness
campaign to show people,how
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can be decreased and what are the steps to be taken helps in the increase of drinking
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.Dumping
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waste material in the
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bodies should be strictly prohibited as an example.
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,
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state
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can
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introduce alternative methods to conserve
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fresh
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freshwater
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water
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. By harvesting
rain
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rainwater
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water
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the problem of drinking liquids can be reduced. In
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most
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gated
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communities
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own
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rain harvesting system which is
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example
to
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rise in
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in that particular
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. To conclude, It is
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global
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prblem
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problem
and they are many reasons for
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. If
government
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the government
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and people take some preventive measures as well as some alternative methods in implementation that can be handled.
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