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More and more companies are allowing employees to work from home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Due to the pandemic situation across all the nations, many companies have facilitated
the
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employees with
work
 from
home
. And adapting to the new culture is found easy and seamless. Working from
home
 has both positive and negative effects on the employees and employers. To start with the pros of the
work
 from
home
 option it is beneficial to the employers by saving the expenses spent on workers
such
 as office rents, electricity, amenities and many other. Workers
also
 get benefited in a manner by staying close to loved ones and family and
also
 avoid any possible chances of virus transmission during travel, working at office and other common areas like canteen, workspace, and toilets. The
work
 from the
home
 program
also
 has negative effects mainly forcing people to
work
 for longer hours than usual and working in uncomfortable positions causing both physical and mental imbalance in the well being of the employees. And many distractions during the business hours, making the tasks take longer durations than expected. ,
Also
this
 has
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 adverse effect on the local businesses, street vendors losing the customers and making their lives difficult to survive. The companies shall analyze and come up with solution-oriented practices to meet the
work
 demand and ensuring the wellness of workers.
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