Animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in the sea. What are the reasons and solution

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In the
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decade, the debate regarding the extinction of some
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types had been raised. Some people believe that human activities are to palm for
animals
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species extinction. In
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I will be discussing the reasons behind mass
animals
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' death as well as I will be suggesting some solutions to tackle
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problem.
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, global warming is the greatest threat to the creatures.
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, the high temperature alters the
animals
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' habitats. As we can see that the ice mountains are melting in the northern earth hemisphere. As a consequence, the creatures life cycle is disrupted and their
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become difficult.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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