What problems does cybercrime cause, and what solutions can you suggest for ordinary people and business to take?

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over the internet has tremendously increased over
last
the few decades as it provides faster processing time and convenience. Many
people
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data
being at risk. In
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we will discuss some possible solutions to
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safeguard
individuals and avoid cybercrimes.
To begin
with, Technology has provided us with the convenience of accessing
data
from any part of the world. Though the security provided on these platforms are up to the mark, individual mistakes
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made their
data
more
vunerable
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vulnerable
for
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hackers to commit crimes.
Data
obtained by these criminals can
also
be used to blackmail for ransom.
Personal
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and sensitive
data
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can bring huge financial and social
loss
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to the company or individual.
Firstly
,
people
should take the security measures required more seriously
that is
, not to share any personal passwords with anyone since, we are aware of
accounts
being linked to each other, one should be very careful about sharing any personal information.
For example
, If a hacker is able to gain access to the emails, it is much
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easier for him to hack into financial and social
accounts
as generally email
accounts
are used for password recovery purposes.
Furthermore
,
people
should avoid downloading illegal content from unknown sources because there is a high possibility of malware in
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which can allow other users to track and obtain
data
from your computer.
Also
, accessing personal
accounts
on public computers should be avoided and without fail,
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accounts
should be logged off after use.
Finally
, Any suspicious activities should not be ignored and required measures should be taken and in case of lost or stolen
data
, complaints should be raised with the authorities.
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, blocking or deactivating
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stolen or unused account can restrict any criminal activities through one's account. To sum up. Cases of cybercrimes are increasing day by day, ordinary
people
and companies should
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strictly
follow security protocols and adequate training should be provided by companies before allowing employees to access official
data
.
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