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Children of ages 7-11 now spend more time watching television and/or playing video games than before. What are the effects of this on children, family and society? What are the possible solutions to this situation

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Nowadays, A large number of primary
children
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 wasted time playing online play and watching television.
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 is mainly because of the lack of outdoor actives and the influence of modern technology . There are a number of solutions that should be implemented to deal with
children
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 who are addicted to online platforms.
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, the reason for most
children
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 committing video games and spend time watching television, is due to the lack of difficulty finding outdoor activities,
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,
children
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 are not given chance to learn new skills for their future or develop a deeper understanding of correct behaviour. There are two effective solutions to the problem of childlike watching television and playing video games. One way to tackle
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 is to ensure that all
children
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 are given the chance to retain with useful activities
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 as doing art with their friend which will hopefully ensure them to enjoy after they have served their recreation.
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, my nephew spends almost 5 hours a day playing online games.
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, making him have a problem with attention deficit.
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, his parents have to take to consult with art therapists for using art materials to healing his psychology. By doing
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, it will help them reintegrate back into society. Another method, of dealing with
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 issue is to have more support from governments to encourage the population about vital relationships in their family. In conclusion, having close observation in family and
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 governments implemented
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 solution, the figure would soon decrease.
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