Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Nowadays,

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contaminants and

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have become catastrophic phenomena. Many

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believe that government should increase the price of petrol to tackle these problems. I totally disagree with

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statement. From my perspective, there are other effective solutions to resolve these obstacles. It is undeniable that one dominant cause of

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and pollution are mass private car use.The biggest problem with increasing the price of petrol is that

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causes growth in the

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of commute and transportation either by public transport or private cars.

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, higher fuel

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is less likely to limit the number of drivers.

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, as far as social issues are concerned, by increasing the

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of fuel

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of living would rise as well which will eventually lead to a less safe country.

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may find pickpocketing and burglarising the way to earn money. In my view, other steps should be taken to control these crises. The

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possible measure is equipping

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public transportation with comfortable seats and good

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condition to persuade

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to use them.

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many

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do not tend to go to their workplace by bus during summer because of the low

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ventilation system.

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, in terms of

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, authorities could build more underground trains and

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railways to reduce the

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on the road. In conclusion, I believe that while rising the

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of fuels is not a practical policy to reduce

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and

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contaminant, spending more money on extending the quality of public transportation and improving the choices of public transport services available for travellers can be good strategies.