Each year, the crime rate increases. What do you think are the causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

In recent days the range of illegal activities range rise, from my perspective I believe that the violations

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yearly, to avoid

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the governments need to severe penalties, the reasons and solution will be explained in the following paragraphs

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many reasons

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crimes increasing yearly,

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as, poverty which

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has many drawbacks, ignorance and lack of job opportunities has a strong impact

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individuals that lead them to robbery,

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ease of punishment by the government make the criminals feel safe,

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, drugs are common among teenagers which is in my point of view is the huge reasons of

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activity,

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mistreating children by household make them growing up with

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issues, On the one hand, all

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causes can be solved by

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and community to stand together and avoid

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jobs opportunities to unemployed people to decrease the poverty between society, another point worth noting is that, provide a free education to prevent ignorance and improve the knowledge and awareness between people, and

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in schools for teenagers about how drugs are

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and

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many problems, what is more, establishing strict laws that fight

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against children by their family or anyone else. To sum up, I would like to close

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argument by assuring that, the illegal activities show rose year by year because of several causes between individuals and to avoid the

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is severe penalties