You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter – say where you are going – describe your house – explain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house

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Dear Ram, I am writing to inform you that

this

summer I will be on a business trip to Australia, and

therefore

, I need your help in looking after my

house

for a period of 15 days. I have been asked by my organisation to meet my client in Brisbane and understand

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business requirements

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theirs

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Therefore

, on 25th May, I will be flying to Australia and will be returning on 10th June. As you must be knowing, I am currently staying in a 2

bedroom-apartment

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at Indiranagar, Bangalore that has an attached balcony in the living room.

Moreover

, I have a

pet-dog

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who is dependent on me as I stay alone there. I am requesting you to step into my home for those 15 days and take care of Bruno, my pet. The food that he eats is available at the shop opposite the

house

In addition

to that, the domestic help arrives every morning at 8 and she will help you with your meals, as well as keeping the

house

clean. In case you step out of the

house

at that time, you can

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the keys to the security guard for her to enter the

house

. I thank you for your consideration. Do let me know if you are comfortable doing

this

or not. Your friend, Abhinav

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

221 words

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You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter – say where you are going – describe your house – explain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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