You are leaving your job and would like to invite your friend to replace you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: -describe the job -explain the reason you are leaving -tell him/her why you would recommend the job to them.

#job #friend #-describe #-explain #reason #-tell

Dear Abhi, Hope you are well. I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I'm leaving my current organization Preqin.

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want you to take up my position of " Manager" here. Let me explain in detail. The job title is Scrum master;

thus

, you will be a part of the PMO

team

and the vital responsibility is to deliver software projects seamlessly.

Hence

, active involvement with the development

team

, product owners and business

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stakeholders

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stake-holders

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are necessary. The product manager and the development

team

is extremely friendly .

Besides

that, the

stackholders

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stakeholders

stockholders

are spread across UK, USA and Germany and they are

also

prompt in providing timely

feedbacks

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feedback

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That is

immensely useful, as the role demands active interaction with all of them mainly to ensure that we are progressing in the right direction. The job is interesting as well as the

team

is dynamic.

However

, as all the involved people are spread across various

timezones

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, so sometimes it will be challenging to conduct meetings at a convenient time. I was enjoying my work here but as you know that my husband is moving to Denmark;

thus

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am leaving

this

job. I'd suggest you

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apply

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take

this

golden opportunity.

This

role gives you exposure to

work

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with the senior leadership

team

, something

that is

impactful for your career.

In addition

to that, the project that I am currently into is the profitable one.

Therefore

, the prospect for promotion and abroad

opportunity

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is there. Let me know if you need

further

details. I look forward to hearing from you. Your Friend, Shreya

Submitted by abhinaba.de on Sun Aug 22 2021

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

263 words

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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