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The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

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There is no doubt that the
population
 are increasing day by day. The cause of
this
 phenomenon are varied and have led to a wide range of effects on human life. I partially agree with
this
 idea and in
this
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 I will outline why the
population
 is increasing. Generally, there is a wide range of reasons why
people
 believe that populations are increasing greatly. Perhaps the primary of
this
 phenomenon is that illiterate person is unable to understand the
impact
 of the
population
 in a limited land. The more illiterate person the more
population
 in their family. If they are not educated, they can not realize that increasing
population
 can have an
impact
 on
the
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society as well as the country.
As a result
, they produce more baby which leads to
increase
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the
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populations
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.
Secondly
,
people
 are not maintaining proper family planning.
For example
, recent UN reports show that only 45% of
people
 maintain family planning which in
in
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turn increases the
population
 in their family.
however
, it must be said that there are several arguments agents that the idea is populations are increasing. Perhaps the strongest of those
people
 are more conscious of the
impact
 of
population
. The government and the agency are trying to make
people
 understand
about
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the
impact
 of the
population
. As a ,
result
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 most of the families do have more than 2 children. In conclusion, the
increasing
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 of
population
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 is an issue
will
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 continue to demand
for
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our attention for the per seeable future. If Government agencies and individuals do not work together, the
willbeing
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wellbeing
will being
 future generation could be affected by the
population
.
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