Earlier technological developments brought more benefits and changed the lives of ordinary people more than recent developments ever will. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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more convenient than the advancement of contemporary skills in the present. I strongly agree that earlier revolutions of
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more beneficial to human beings. At
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in the 1900s, there was a significant revolution in transportation, which made
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very quickly,
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the life of
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still is changing so fast.
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, folk are used to horse or bike or
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in order to go somewhere which takes a lot of time to get to specific places.
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people
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had hardly travelled abroad before
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developed which decreased a lot of time to go somewhere and way faster than by
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or riding a horse.
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, it has already been developed and used till now.
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development of technic in computer, A.I and electronic appliances which
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already created before the 2000s.
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because some scientists warned some
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as A.I and SNS that give damages for human
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sometimes.
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but
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life.
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, some experts
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that
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people
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robot
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too much.
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can be dominated by A.I.
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developing
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can be very harmful to the world.
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, I think the things
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as transportation,
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, cell
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and so on that
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need that those have already
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in the 1900s. That’s why
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should make a solution to prevent any damages which come from
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in a recent study.
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