Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, Most of the people advocate that social subject

such

as

History

plays

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role on students while others claim actual subjects learning have numerous advantages upon future career life of students. I am explaining both perspectives for two

essence

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reasons in the following paragraphs.

To begin

with, Adults who are parents support improving

of

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their

childreen

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children

not only education but

also

social

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skill.

Therefore

, they always research the most effective method for their

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children

children's

childrens

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itineraries.

Moreover

, they get

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and

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advice

advises

advices

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advice

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from experts. Regarding

to

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Experts,

history

and similar subjects are provided

contribution

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a contribution

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to keeping and extending cultural

informations

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information

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.

For instance

, plenty of the European

Countries

obligate getting lessons related their culture and

history

in order to

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of form of their society.

Likewise

, they prevent

to

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establishing companies that belong to

asian

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or

arabic

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cultures due to conserving to

potantial

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potential

culturel

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cultural

corruptions.

Secondly

, numerous people believe that science and

technology

are valid

in

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everywhere. Globalization is forced to changing all

of

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Countries

. Unless

countries

catch developing

technology

, they come across some problems as economic.

Furthermore

, most of the lecturers notice that children learn anything easily

then

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older people.

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Additionally

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, knowledge of using

technology

has

positive

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impact on career life. If new graduates have good computer skills, they catch

opportunites

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opportunities

of workplaces.

For example

, Some

of

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countries

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the countries

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that

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are backward

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backward

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find jobs in

improvement

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countries

when they develop

skill

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the skill

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of computer. To sum up, It is clear that

history

consider

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contribution saving culture whereas science and

technology

support

to

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almost all of

sectors

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the sectors

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.