The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities is by reducing the need for people to travel from home to work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Owning to the problems which a growing amount of conjuncted
traffic
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causes for
cities
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, some
people
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belive
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that the only key to
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problem
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is by letting
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work, study and purchase everything without leaving their homes. As for me, I lean to agree with
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opinion in some measure
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, there are some more effective ways of reducing
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jams in
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.
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, dealing with
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issue we have to keep in mind that it seems to be impossible to make
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stay home almost all the time as it is vital for them as bio-social creatures to stay in touch with each other.
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, there are some occupations which require
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people
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to move around the
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alot
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a lot
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why I reckon that the
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of the overloaded
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in
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and megacities can be solved by encouraging
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-dwellers and others situating within a
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to
se
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use
public transportation on a daily basis.
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way of reducing road conjunctions not only narrows the number of vehicles on the road but
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seems to be more eco-friendly carrying at least 40 or 50 passengers at a time. Another point to consider is that the number of overloaded roads can be cut on by placing a ban on all means of transport but a public one to be used ib the
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-centre district. Statistics prove that countries which put
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a ban into force for big developing
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only benefit from that as it curbs not only the number of cars but
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so-called hustle and
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bustle
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of
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-dwellers as well as tourists more convenient.
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, making
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a decision
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administration should
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pay attention to the fact that introducing
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rules immediately implies significant improvement of the road system surrounding the
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centre. On
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occasion only it turns out to be executable and manageable to solve the
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of conjuncted
traffic
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all over a
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. Summarising all the above, it should be
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reiterated
that to deal with the overloaded
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roads, changing
people
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's attitude to the public transport as well as simultaneously banning heavy
traffic
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from the
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centre appears to be the most profitable and efficient method to use solving the
problem
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concerned.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Commuting patterns
  • Remote work
  • Telecommuting
  • E-learning platforms
  • E-commerce
  • Urban planning
  • Public transportation
  • Infrastructure development
  • Green spaces
  • Pedestrianization
  • Carbon footprint
  • Sustainable living
  • Carpooling
  • Cycle lanes
  • Mixed-use development
  • Teleconference
  • Urban sprawl
  • Zoning regulations
  • Traffic congestion
  • City logistics
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