The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal?
It is often argued that to marry with
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same-gender
same
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the same
gender
have a negative impact on society, while that have
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has
also
it is freedom of individual
. I completely gay Add an article
the individual
marriage
have to be legal it doesn’t need to be illegal.
At first
, this
is about to create another discrimination
over the world. In other words
, nowadays, all
know which is fair or unfair. That’s because All over the countries, they have that kinds of problems still exist Correct pronoun usage
we all
such
as gender
discrimination
, racism and generation discrimination
. However
, people have broken out the
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apply
discrimination
by law. Thus
, gay marriage
is also
same
problem, which Change the article
the same
have
to be equalised.
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Secondly
, loving same gender
is not illness
or weird phenomenon, it is Add an article
an illness
very
natural character of humans, even if they are Add an article
the very
minority
. Add an article
a minority
the minority
That is
to say, that did not suddenly pop up to
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in to
real
world, it has Add an article
the real
been existed
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existed
from
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since
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apply
For example
, there is a lot of story and books that story about loving same gender
. Moreover
, human
who is gay, lesbian or bisexual, they are nothing different from heterosexual except awareness of society and law. Add an article
a human
the human
Hence
, it even if they are minority
, they should be treated and respected for Add an article
a minority
the minority
right
of human being same as the majority.
To sum up, sometimes the majority of people don’t understand about gay Add an article
the right
marriage
, but I strongly insist that having relation with same sex
or Add a hyphen
same-sex
marriage
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same-gender
same
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the same
gender
they should be admitted by law and then
people can accept it. It is very
natural Correct article usage
a very
trends
as well.Fix the agreement mistake
trend
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