The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal?

It is often argued that to marry with

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same

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gender

have a negative impact on society, while that

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to be accepted to society equally for human’s right and

also

it is freedom of

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. I completely gay

marriage

have to be legal it doesn’t need to be illegal. At

first

,

this

is about to create another

discrimination

over the world.

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, nowadays,

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know which is fair or unfair. That’s because All over the countries, they have that kinds of problems still exist

such

as

gender

discrimination

, racism and generation

discrimination

.

However

, people have broken out

the

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any

discrimination

by law.

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, gay

marriage

is

also

same

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problem, which

have

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to be equalised.

Secondly

, loving same

gender

is not

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or weird phenomenon, it is

very

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natural character of humans, even if they are

minority

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.

That is

to say, that did not suddenly pop up

to

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real

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world, it has

been existed

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from

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the

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history.

For example

, there is a lot of story and books that story about loving same

gender

.

Moreover

,

human

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who is gay, lesbian or bisexual, they are nothing different from heterosexual except awareness of society and law.

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, it even if they are

minority

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, they should be treated and respected for

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of human being same as the majority. To sum up, sometimes the majority of people don’t understand about gay

marriage

, but I strongly insist that having relation with

same sex

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or

marriage

with

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same

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gender

they should be admitted by law and

then

people can accept it. It is

very

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natural

trends

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as well.