Many people work long hours leaving very little time for leisure activities does the situation have more advantages or disadvantages?

Nowadays researches proved, that there are several different ways of learning, which are

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or learning alone. In my

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the best way to improve especially cognitive

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is learning in a

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essay will show, how a higher motivation and different points of

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with other’s much more sufficient than

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, it is clear that the

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of motivation is considerably higher

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when other

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are involved in learning.

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aiming for the same target , trying to either reach it together or faster than the other one, are more likely to succeed. Another advantage is social interaction, which brings

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together and they can motivate each other to raise their skill

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meet in public places and interact socially to improve their intellectual

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place, a clear advantage of learning together is

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view. Obviously,

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bring a variety of requirements into the

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activities.

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they might be on a different intellectual

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, others will certainly benefit from new ideas. In conclusion, the benefit of

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activities to improve cognitive

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is in my opinion clearly higher than any other

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of learning. The

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of motivation increases incredibly with

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the success of improving

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grows as well. A variety of educational levels brings the advantage of new ideas and different points of view for the ability to overthink a thesis.