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Obesity
 is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer. These days there is serious concern about
obesity
 worldwide, but especially in wealthy countries. I believe that there are two major issues, which are Fast
Food
 and a
lack
 of
exercise
.
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this
 essay
also
 proposes possible solutions to each of these issues. First of
all
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it is clear that
 Fast
Food
 is the main reason for
obesity
. Almost every bigger city in the world has a Fast
Food
 restaurant, which makes it
easy
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 accessible and promises a quick feed. The result is a considerably high amount of
health
 problems, which might be diabetes, liver problems and
a
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high blood pressure.
Nonetheless
, a possible way to solve
this
 problem
are
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health
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through health
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 education and programs.
For example
 advertisements on
the
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TV about how to cook fresh meals in a short time.
Secondly
, there is little doubt that a
lack
 of
exercise
 is another
problemthat
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problem that
 leads to
obesity
. The reasons are a shortage of knowledge about the importance of
exercise
, a
lack
 of motivation and it is
time consuming
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. One likely answer is to encourage and educate people, which could be a benefit of
health
insurances
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insurance
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, in
form
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 of a fitness pass. In conclusion, two serious issues of
obesity
 are
easy
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easily
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 accessible and unhealthy Fast
Food
 and a
considerably
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considerable
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lack
 of
exercise
.
Nevertheless
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Nevertheless,
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 solutions to these problems are in my opinion on one hand
health
 education as in advertisement and benefits from
health
insurances
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insurance
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.
Obesity
 is a serious concern and people should begin to perceive it as that.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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