Currently there is a use of alternative medicine. However at the best these methods are ineffective, and at most they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Obesity

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is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer. These days there is serious concern about

obesity

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worldwide, but especially in wealthy countries. I believe that there are two major issues, which are Fast

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and a

lack

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of

exercise

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this

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essay

also

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proposes possible solutions to each of these issues. First of

all

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it is clear that

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Fast

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is the main reason for

obesity

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. Almost every bigger city in the world has a Fast

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restaurant, which makes it

easy

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accessible and promises a quick feed. The result is a considerably high amount of

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problems, which might be diabetes, liver problems and

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high blood pressure.

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, a possible way to solve

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problem

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health

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education and programs.

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TV about how to cook fresh meals in a short time.

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, there is little doubt that a

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of

exercise

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is another

problemthat

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problem that

leads to

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. The reasons are a shortage of knowledge about the importance of

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, a

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of motivation and it is

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. One likely answer is to encourage and educate people, which could be a benefit of

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insurances

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, in

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of a fitness pass. In conclusion, two serious issues of

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are

easy

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accessible and unhealthy Fast

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and a

considerably

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lack

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of

exercise

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.

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solutions to these problems are in my opinion on one hand

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education as in advertisement and benefits from

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insurances

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.

Obesity

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is a serious concern and people should begin to perceive it as that.