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Nowadays, many people have to work longer hours, and they feel more stressed out than before. What are the reasons? What can employers do to make life easier?

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It is an irrefutable fact that in today's time, extended
work
 hours have resulted in acute
stress
 amongst individuals than earlier.
This
 essay shall
potray
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portray
 some of the causes of
this
 phenomenon and
also
 suggest some measures that
organization
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organizations
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 can adopt to overcome it.
To begin
 with, these days companies strive hard to maintain their brand value
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marketplace
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.
As a result
, unrealistic deadlines are enforced on people at
work
.
This
 may not only cause excessive workload but
also
 extra pressure on a person trying to meet these timelines. Following
this
, cut-throat competition is the dominant cause of
stress
 at workstations.
Moreover
, employees compete amongst themselves to achieve good appraisal and increased
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. To do so, they indulge in extra firm initiatives to showcase their productivity
infront
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in front
 of the higher management.
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 to achieve
this
,
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work
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workers
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 over the weekends and in double shifts to meet their targets. Studies suggest 90% of the men are distressed at workstations.
On the other hand
, employers can take few steps to reduce
stress
 among the wage earners.
Firstly
,
work
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 burden should be reduced by evenly distributing tasks among the team members. Due to
this
, one might not feel overly pressurised or overburdened.
Secondly
, well-being programs should be conducted and factories should
also
 encourage workmen to take some
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time off
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time-off
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 from
work
 and avail their leave entitlements. To sum up,
stress
 caused due to
prolong
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work
 hours is of great concern.
However
, employers can combat it by maintaining
work-life
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a work-life
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 balance and reducing workload.
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