With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction.

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Wildlife
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is a gift of mother nature.
Wildlife
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does not include only wild
animals
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, but it is
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including insects, birds, and micro-organism
species
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etc. and for the balance of the
ecosystem
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it should be treated as important as human beings. Each organism has a vital role in the
ecosystem
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,
however
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, the world's
animals
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are endangered because of their loss of habitat, illegal hunting, deforestation and some of them are on the list of extinction. In
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essay, we discuss why they are important and how to protect them.
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with, biodiversity is important to a healthy
ecosystem
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. If one of the
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species
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extinct the whole food chain disrupted and it's
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effect the whole
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,
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Similarly
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if one
species
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is increasing it is still an imbalance in the
ecosystem
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.
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, If all carnivores are vanished
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herbivores will rise and our
ecosystem
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still imbalance, so it is important to save for the whole natural cycle and biodiversity
On the other hand
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, we can protect
wildlife
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with the help of the government and
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public help.
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, The government should make strict laws against hunting and deforestation as well as maintain these rules should be followed so that, hunters get punish for hunting.
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, the public should become a green consumer.
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, grocery stores should go green by using paper bags
instead
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of plastic bags owing to so many insects and organisms are trapped and killed by these bags. In conclusion, Government should go the extra mile and make rules against hunting and deforestation
also
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the public should
also
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follow these rules and protect our
wildlife
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animals
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. Biodiversity is vital for a healthy and functional
ecosystem
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. The
ecosystem
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is delicate. Extracting
wildlife
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from its natural habitat inevitably leads to disastrous results. If a single
species
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should become extinct, the whole food chain is disrupted – affecting all
species
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.
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, if a
species
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get an increase in number, it can have an adverse effect on the ecological balance. If carnivores are becoming extinct, the number of herbivorous
animals
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will rise,
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leaving us with an imbalanced
ecosystem
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. For agriculture and farming
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