With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction.

Wildlife
is a gift of mother nature.
Wildlife
does not include only wild
animals
, but it is
also
including insects, birds, and micro-organism
species
etc. and for the balance of the
ecosystem
it should be treated as important as human beings. Each organism has a vital role in the
ecosystem
,
however
, the world's
animals
are endangered because of their loss of habitat, illegal hunting, deforestation and some of them are on the list of extinction. In
this
essay, we discuss why they are important and how to protect them.
To begin
with, biodiversity is important to a healthy
ecosystem
. If one of the
species
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extinct the whole food chain disrupted and it's
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effect the whole
ecosystem
,
Similarly
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if one
species
is increasing it is still an imbalance in the
ecosystem
.
For Instance
, If all carnivores are vanished
then
herbivores will rise and our
ecosystem
still imbalance, so it is important to save for the whole natural cycle and biodiversity
On the other hand
, we can protect
wildlife
with the help of the government and
also
public help.
For example
, The government should make strict laws against hunting and deforestation as well as maintain these rules should be followed so that, hunters get punish for hunting.
Secondly
, the public should become a green consumer.
For example
, grocery stores should go green by using paper bags
instead
of plastic bags owing to so many insects and organisms are trapped and killed by these bags. In conclusion, Government should go the extra mile and make rules against hunting and deforestation
also
the public should
also
follow these rules and protect our
wildlife
animals
. Biodiversity is vital for a healthy and functional
ecosystem
. The
ecosystem
is delicate. Extracting
wildlife
from its natural habitat inevitably leads to disastrous results. If a single
species
should become extinct, the whole food chain is disrupted – affecting all
species
.
Similarly
, if a
species
get an increase in number, it can have an adverse effect on the ecological balance. If carnivores are becoming extinct, the number of herbivorous
animals
will rise,
consequently
leaving us with an imbalanced
ecosystem
. For agriculture and farming
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