Describe a restaurant or a café you like most. Write an essay about 265 words

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There are many

kind

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of cafes that I really love. But I suppose the best

cafe

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I have ever experienced is the Kafa

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. Located near my house, Kafa

cafe

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is always full of guests. The

cafe

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is fascinated to thousands of visitors. As usual, my family visits here on Sundays. I am totally amazed at

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accommodation

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the accomodation

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in spite of its old look. Hung on the wall, the huge name "Kafa" holds

pedestrian's

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the pedestrian's

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attention. Come inside, I

first

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feel the cool wind blow around us as we pushed open the heavy wooden doors. Chilled and relaxed, I walk up to the waiter to order a cup of milk. The

cafe

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has two floors, but how comfortable chairs are !. After a while, I find the

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floor is much more fantastic than the

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one.

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the

cafe

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is originally an ancient wooden house, it

bring

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visitors a feeling of remarkable due to the excitement of everyone after having their joyful day. About the taste of

drink

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the drink

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, I cannot say anything other than perfect ! There is no doubt that

cafe

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and milk here has a secret recipe. Whenever I do not have an interest in milk anymore, I always have a slight meal with chicken soup.

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The menu

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varous

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various

of food and

drink

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drinks

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that I can choose anything fit with my taste. Despite the excellent taste, prices are really reasonable as it is fit with everyone's money In the end, I have tons of fun. Kafacafe has

stunning

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a stunning

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view

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views

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, delicious food, and

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, friendly people with pleasant services Indeed, the

cafe

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is an incredible place if you are

desperated

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desperate

to have a wonderful time with your family. I hope I can visit it another time.

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Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

286 words

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Describe a restaurant or a café you like most. Write an essay about 265 words

Fully explain your ideas

The charts detail the proportion of Australian secondary school graduates who were unemployed, employed or further education in 1980, 1990, and 2000.

In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

Some people believe that communication skill is important in convincing people while others have a different point of view. To what extend do you agree or disagree

Some say that advertisements of snacks and toys have a great impact on children and their parents. So, the advertisement to children should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, companies allow people to work from home. In others, people are still expected to work in an office. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.