Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
There is no doubt that social
media
is becoming increasingly popular among all generations. Moreover
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helped lots of people
to meet people
from different countries and understand different cultures.This
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Therefore
, social media
helped lots of people
to stay in contact with their friends and family who are thousand
of miles apart.
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On the other hand
, however
, there are some definite drawbacks of social media
.The worst of which is the fact that your personal information can be exposed which has a really negative impact on your privacy this
is because once you share your current location some people
can track you and hurt you easily.For instance
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apps so it made it easier for stalkers to find a victim.
In conclusion, although
there are clearly equally valid arguments for and against the use of social media
. I, personally feel that on balance, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages because everyone should be aware of sharing their personal information on the internet because you can put yourself in danger if you did not use it safely.Submitted by yahyagamal2010 on
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