Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating disease is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree?

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enormous cost

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medication in

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world, anticipate the ailment always is the best way to reduce the expenses. There is no real course in

prevention

and doctors today do not pay to

prevention

. But now, how we can prevent

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incurable illness? Treatment without

prevention

is simply unsustainable. I totally agree with

this

argument. Nowadays,

prevention

is

cheaper

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, much easier and more reassuring measure. While treatment is more difficult and costly and is associated with pain and suffering. Treatment requires many methods with medication which has many side effects and is only for one

diseases

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,

although

prevention

is for disease. The

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research on breast cancer

have

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shown that 98.6

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women

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who get diagnosed have cancer in stage one or stage two are going to be cured by preventive measures.

For instance

, eating

healthy

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diet at right time, drinking clean water and follow good habits.

This

argument that

prevention

is better than cure, teaches us to adopt healthy habits of eating and living. It teaches us to do everything in

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in order to avoid

last

moment harassment. We should plan

our

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all the activities for the project we have already decide to do in the future. It helps us to prevent

from

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all the endangerment that may occur because of our irregularity in the daily routine

such

as, if we eat easily digestible food, our stomach will be healthy and calm. If we check up our body every month we prevent

from

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disease. So, we should make ourselves ready for all the

circumstance

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. To conclude, life is very short and we should enjoy it completely.

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, it is only possible when we are

stress free

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in our whole life. All of us should follow the principles of

prevention

strictly and faithfully to every aspect of life and remember that the key role of government

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improve

this

system and

national

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budget should be allocated to achieve

this

.