convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Since the advent of mechanization and processing techniques developed during the
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around the Industrial Revolution, our
food
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has become increasingly removed and modified from its natural state. Despite
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trend, I would argue in
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essay that it is impossible to exclude traditional cuisine from our daily life and
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way of eating will become more valuable to
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.   It is
undoubtable
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undoubtedly
that convenient
foods
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have become widely popular especially among
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people, teenage children, sharing rooms etc, because of their convenience. They are often prepared or packaged before being consumed and can be used at any
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, quickly and easily by thawing or heating the
food
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, which can reduce preparation and waiting
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to a great extent.
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, convenient
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are designed to be cheap, tasty and non-perishable as the ingredients added into these packaged products contain high levels of sugars and fats.
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, eating packaged
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for a long period of
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the possibility of having health problems, like malnutrition, diabetes and heart disease.   Traditional
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are those eaten by people over the longer course of civilization, they contain the highest levels of nutrition available for our wellness because they are grown or produced using sustainable methods which maintain nutrient content and exclude chemicals and other dangerous substances which have been found to diminish nutritional value. On a larger scale,
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is an important part of
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. Traditional cuisine is passed down from one generation to the
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. It
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operates as an expression of cultural identity. Many of us associate
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from our childhood with warm feelings and good memories and it ties us to our families, holding a special and personal value for us. Other than that, immigrants bring the
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of their countries with them wherever they go and cooking traditional
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is a way of preserving their culture when they move to new places.   To conclude, though many urban and rural residents had succumbed to the temptations of packaged
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, the dominance of traditional
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will remain in the long term future.
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