Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that the subject of
science
and
technology
should be prioritized
than
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history
in
schools
presently. I will discuss both ideas and give my opinion in
this
essay.
Firstly
, on one side of the argument, some individuals think
history
is one of the most important subjects to be taught in
schools
. Students ought to know their historical background which is paid less attention to in
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society today.
That is
, the new age of information focuses on the latest trends things and how it relates to the future and parents
also
don’t tell their children about
history
at home
hence
this
subject matter should take preference in
schools
so historical heritage will not die out.
For example
, in Garbon,
history
is one of
the subjects pupils
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should compulsorily pass in their A level results before going into
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university. That goes a long way to make
schools
prioritize the subject for
its
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students. On the
second
side of the argument, I think
science
and
technology
are more important subjects to our society today than
history
. The world is moving into a technological era and
thus
, students should be shaped
accordingly
.
This
is because, almost everything we use these days, even to teach, are made using
technology
and so prioritizing
history
over
science
will do no good to our present environment.
For instance
, China which is the
worlds
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most
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fastest growing
technology
today prioritize
science
and
technology
in all their educational institutions, pupils are exposed to it at a very young age and
this
develops their minds in that direction and of
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the results are clear in their technological advancement. To conclude, I think the world will be better if more is put to place in teaching
science
and
technology
more in
schools
rather than
history
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Historical perspective
  • Analytical skills
  • Contextual understanding
  • Technological advancements
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • Innovation
  • Interdisciplinary
  • Job market
  • Climate crisis
  • Cultural identity
  • Critical thinking
  • Humanities
  • Contemporary issues
  • Integration
  • Tech-savvy
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