Tourism has increased so much over the last 50years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and the disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.

It is constantly discussed in society the positive and negatives aspects of
tourism
to local residents ecosystem and economy. The paragraphs below will discuss both points of view and,
then
, give my own perspective.
To begin
with, there are two possible advantages of encouraging
tourism
in places.
First
of all, it foments local market, increasing purchase value of merchandises and,
consequently
, improve companies' income.
For instance
, tapioca is a
tradicional
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traditional
Brazilian food and
affordable
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to buy in
supermakets
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supermarkets
.
However
, its value augments in touristic hotspots. Another motive to explain the government
investiments
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investments
investment
to amplify
tourism
is the incentive for enterprises to renovate and modernize their structures,
thus
, justifying the price readjustment. In stark contrast, some drawbacks are
also
noticed with the increased touristic movement. A
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outcome discussed among urbanists is the gentrification process. More specifically, local natives whose wages are not enough to follow the readjusted prices are forced to move out of these centres to live in farther venues, giving place to those ones that can afford
paying
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for it, which is unfair.
Moreover
, another problem caused
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tourists visiting is the environmental damage. As a consequence of companies production and individual's
consuming
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, more trash is produced
proporcionally
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proportionally
proportional
, which combined with an improper destination, accumulates in the
ecossytem
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ecosystem
. To conclude,
tourism
have
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its merits and demerits.
Although
, in my opinion, a balance should be aimed and reached to control local prices,
environment
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damage and encourage visiting by foreigners.
Thus
, natives would still keep their households well located and be able to profit
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it
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them
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • negative impact
  • local inhabitants
  • economy
  • boosts
  • cultural exchange
  • preservation
  • restoration
  • environmental degradation
  • overcrowding
  • strain
  • infrastructure
  • cultural dilution
  • commercialized
  • economic dependence
  • sustainable tourism
  • mitigate
  • adverse effects
  • regulation
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