The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reasons for the growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?

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one of crucial and extremely increasing

health

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problems that

people

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are concerned about. There are many ways to solve

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problem

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. In

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essay, I will share my perspective about the reason for

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and the ways to decline

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problem

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, the reasons

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being overweight are

eating

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the eating

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habits and

daily

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routine of

people

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. Nowadays,

people

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must work hard for their succeeds and high-quality

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,

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therefor

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they will have urgent activities in their

life

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that can cause many effects.

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, they must eat junk foods that

not

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good for

health

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and

high

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calories because they do not have

time

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for

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prepare food by themselves.

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,

people

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always feel exhausted after they finished hard work and they want to relax for

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reason they do not

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waste their

time

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for exercise. In my opinion, changing some things in

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can cause huge effect and solve

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problem

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, the most important things they should

change

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is their mindset that they have no

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for

relax

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because

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can exercise and relax at the same

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,

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, they can

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interesting podcasts while walking 20 to 30 minute per day and they can play hula hoop while watching TV. Another thing that they should

change

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is

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change

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their eating habits. They should eat

a good food

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good food

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, eat more vegetables, and reduce eating junk foods and sugar in their meal for good

health

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. In conclusion,

people

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have to

change

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a

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something in their

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for better

health

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but not only changing something but

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having enough sleep and good mental

health

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are

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crucial for

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this

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problem

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and it has to use

time

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. There are no shortcuts

for

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succeed

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