Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is said that government money should be spent on
railways
instead
of roads. I strongly
agree
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whit
this
statment
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statement
because of
safty
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safety
and reduce air pollution.
Traveling
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by train with
less accident
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is the safest way among other means of communication. Every year people died in car accidents as a
consecuense
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consequence
of
highe
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high
higher
speed and lack of attention, while
trains
have professional drivers and move through rails which there are
not
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other
trains
at the same time so that
this
potentially decrease
rate
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of
crash
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. As well as it you may sleep or read a book without being concern about the way and focus on it to avoid
acciden
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accidents
accident
.
In addition
,
train
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as
a
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public transportation
contribute
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to
decline
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air pollution.
Trains
can convey numerous people and goods at a time, whereas with a car you can transport ultimate
four
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person
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therefore
you need a lot of cars which it causes traffic congestion.
This
produce
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much exhaust fumes rather than train.
Trains
also
are faster than private cars and public buses and would save
peoples
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valuable time every day. Some may argue that
construction
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of
railways
would be more prohibitive than roads.
However
, to consider long-term goals,
such
as creating
sustainable
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environment and diminish other expenses related to cars it would be better to
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on
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railways
. In conclusion, I believe
enormous
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amount of money should be allocated
on
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railways
in order to decrease
accident
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accidents
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to provide safety and prevent more environmental pollution.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • environmental footprint
  • efficiency
  • pollution
  • cost-effectiveness
  • economic development
  • accessibility
  • public transportation
  • congestion
  • air pollution
  • initial investment
  • maintenance
  • upgrades
  • rural
  • urban
  • last-mile connectivity
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