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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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There is a saying that “Music is another form of meditation”. Who could possibly deny that? It’s a very assertive fact that rhythms have their own way to indulge people. It has
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 to unite and connect individuals regardless of their ages and cultural background. I strongly agree with the fact that music has
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 to be felt by every human being from toddlers to
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. Melodies certainly can cross the boundaries and bring societies together. It is not unreal that music lovers unite enthusiastically despite
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being of different age groups, caste, languages or gender. The best example of
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 Justine Bieber or A R Rehman or BTS or Operas. All these concerts have
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 of huge success in
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 of both,
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 of people come to watch them
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and leave
 an impact on an international platform. I believe that music is the Universe’s global language.
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, it has no age bar that whenever soothing chords or beautiful voice banged on our ears human tends to move and groove no matter if he is
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 man.
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 would explain why all singing reality shows like X-Factor, The Voice, Indian Idol has
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 of fan base and loyal audience. Families prefer to watch these shows with
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popcorn and under
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 roof together. Sometimes in IT companies employees prefer to sing their favourite songs as an icebreaker when they are newly entered in that team. In my opinion, there’s no other entertainment
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this
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 one place and vibe
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 capacity to create
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 environment and can take anyone on
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 mental trip which is undoubtedly healthy for
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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