Most of successful invention do not rely on complicated technology. In fact, some of the word’s greatest inventions have been very simple things. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

The fact that a lot of commentators advocate the idea that
inventions
do not always stem from complicated technologies. Personally, I am convinced by
this
statement because there are a lot of
inventions
based on basic items
still
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have useful features to meet the needs of human beings in daily
life
. On the one hand,
internet
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maybe becomes one of the greatest
inventions
of
century
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the century
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. There is no doubt that
this
invention with complicated technology and
milions
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millions
of code to create it. Another example
are
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related to
internet
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the internet
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about
laptop
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the laptop
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. It can
helps
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us to solve tremendous issues easily.
On the other hand
, There a lot of
inventions
which is useful and suitable for our
life
, but it is very simple. One of the simple
inventions
is
fire
.
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was discovered a long time ago, at that time people have no modern
inventions
like us today. They need
fire
who warm their body
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and cook their food. But nowadays
fire
plays a crucial role in our modern
life
, it can use to light up when the power suddenly goes out. And in the field of entertainment,
fire
is used
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circus
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the circus
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by circus performers. Overall, I believe that complicated technology
bring
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many advantages to people
life
, but it does not mean that simple complicated was underestimated. We need to remember and understand
it’s
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its
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true
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natural
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nature
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • profound impact
  • complicated technology
  • successful inventions
  • accessible
  • affordable
  • solve
  • common
  • daily problems
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