Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’ How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

It is undeniable that many big cities in the world are facing the

traffic

congestion

issue

which

caused

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by the increase in car ownership, nowadays. From my point of view, I think that the

traffic

jam

issue

is caused by many reasons, and the state governments should provide some policies or measures to reduce using individual

cars

. In the following paragraph, the reasons to support my opinion will be outlined in the detail. I think that

this

statement is a dramatic

true

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because many

people

in modern society believe that

people

who have their own

cars

are more successful in life than those who do not have

cars

.

Additionally

, they said that everyone in

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city must have their own

cars

for comfort.

For example

, many families in Bangkok cities, Thailand, often have at least 2

cars

, one of the fathers and another one of the mothers, for comfort. If someone in their family has an emergency that must use a car, they will not have to wait for another person. To solve the

traffic

jam problem, the state government in each country should provide some policies and encourage

people

to reduce using private

cars

.

For instance

, they should decrease the public transport fare to make it accessible for everybody,

firstly

.

Secondly

, they should build more bike roads and encourage

people

to use bicycles.

Furthermore

, the leadership should improve the quality of

the

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public transportation

such

as being on time

of

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buses and trains. In conclusion, I strongly think that the

traffic

congestion

issue

at the present

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the result of human activities, like excessive use of personal vehicles.

Although

car ownership is a significant problem that causes the

traffic

jam

issue

, there are often problems as well.

Therefore

, it is recommended that both the government and individuals should take serious actions on

this

problem.