Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’ How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

It is undeniable that many big cities in the world are facing the

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by the increase in car ownership, nowadays. From my point of view, I think that the

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is caused by many reasons, and the state governments should provide some policies or measures to reduce using individual

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. In the following paragraph, the reasons to support my opinion will be outlined in the detail. I think that

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because many

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in modern society believe that

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who have their own

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are more successful in life than those who do not have

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city must have their own

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for comfort.

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, many families in Bangkok cities, Thailand, often have at least 2

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, one of the fathers and another one of the mothers, for comfort. If someone in their family has an emergency that must use a car, they will not have to wait for another person. To solve the

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jam problem, the state government in each country should provide some policies and encourage

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to reduce using private

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.

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, they should decrease the public transport fare to make it accessible for everybody,

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, they should build more bike roads and encourage

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to use bicycles.

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, the leadership should improve the quality of

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public transportation

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buses and trains. In conclusion, I strongly think that the

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the result of human activities, like excessive use of personal vehicles.

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car ownership is a significant problem that causes the

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jam

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, there are often problems as well.

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, it is recommended that both the government and individuals should take serious actions on

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problem.