Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

There is a school of thought that, raising gasoline pricing would help to prevent the number of

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the roads, and help to keep

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clean. I believe that most of the time, we still have a chance to

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the existing technology towards finding alternative

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and to reduce crude

oil related

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products in the market.

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the one hand, we can expect a reduction

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the consumption of

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fuel usage by increasing the prices. To be exact, when there is a high cost to be paid for

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petrol or diesel, people generally

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lowering

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their day to day expenses. When

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happens, general people may tend to

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public transport

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of using personal

vehicles

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.

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there is a probability of preventing

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number of

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in urban and sub-urban areas, thereby reducing the adverse effect on the natural world.

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of technology enhancement, in finding renewable

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Sources will result in avoiding undesirable effects that unbalance the whole eco-system. As an example electric

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will avoid air pollution, and introducing

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trains will directly involve

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minimizing congestions with fewer automobiles on road.

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it is clear that

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there are enormous alternatives that can be used to minimize fossil fuel usage and achieving cleaner

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. In my perspective, I strongly trust that

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of renewable

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, as a replacement for crude oil will benefit both humans

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and our natural world.

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, as the

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step of

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energy

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concept, it is worth

to sell

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crude oil

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high prices.