Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

It is fact that some

museums

are

higly

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highly

expensive to

visit

, where few are freely open to visitors. The High

charges

in

museums

are important for

its

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maintenance and to attract tourists, whereas these actions

makes

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poor people and some tourists away

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from

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form

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Exploring these

places

are the main drawbacks. The main advantages of heavy taxes in

museums

are to keep these

places

alive and

also

to attract foreigners. By

increasing

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entry price

museums

can pay wages to their staff, and to settle huge maintenance

cost

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and

also

for some renovation

wokrs

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works

, which helps

museums

to stay for a long period. Another advantage is by good maintenance many

tourst

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tourist

from all over the world can

visit

and experience the history and culture of those

places

.

For example

, Getty Center in Los Angeles

charges

exorbitant

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amount of

charges

from visitors for the

reapirs

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repairs

and they

also

add new amenities for

museums

to look attractive. Some

disadvantage

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of

this

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these

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actions are, destitute people can't get

chance

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to watch and

museum

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museums

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may louse

thier

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their

frequent

coutomers

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customers

. By imposing heavy taxation many poor people can't make to

visit

these

museums

, because their earnings are very low and unable to pay $30 for each person. Another negative point is the explorers who

visit

heritage

centures

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centuries

dentures

regularly can stop going to these

places

.

This

leads to

permanent

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the permanent

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closure of certain

centers

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.

For instance

, A survey on

museums

shows that most of the high priced

museums

are moving towards shutdowns, because of

reduction

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in tourist count to those

places

. In conclusion, They are some benefits of high entry prices, but the disadvantages overweigh the positive points of

museums

charges

.

Thus

, my suggestion is that the government and some charity organizations

sholud

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should

take an initiative and support these

place

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places

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to run regularly.