Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
It is fact that some
museums
are Use synonyms
higly
expensive to Correct your spelling
highly
visit
, where few are freely open to visitors. The High Use synonyms
charges
in Use synonyms
museums
are important for Use synonyms
its
maintenance and to attract tourists, whereas these actions Correct pronoun usage
their
makes
poor people and some tourists away Change the verb form
make
Correct your spelling
from
form
Exploring these Correct your spelling
from
places
are the main drawbacks.
The main advantages of heavy taxes in Use synonyms
museums
are to keep these Use synonyms
places
alive and Use synonyms
also
to attract foreigners. By Linking Words
increasing
entry price Add a comma
,increasing
museums
can pay wages to their staff, and to settle huge maintenance Use synonyms
cost
and Fix the agreement mistake
costs
also
for some renovation Linking Words
wokrs
, which helps Correct your spelling
works
museums
to stay for a long period. Another advantage is by good maintenance many Use synonyms
tourst
from all over the world can Correct your spelling
tourist
visit
and experience the history and culture of those Use synonyms
places
. Use synonyms
For example
, Getty Center in Los Angeles Linking Words
charges
Use synonyms
exorbitant
amount of Add an article
an exorbitant
charges
from visitors for the Use synonyms
reapirs
and they Correct your spelling
repairs
also
add new amenities for Linking Words
museums
to look attractive.
Some Use synonyms
disadvantage
of Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantages
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this
actions are, destitute people can't get Correct determiner usage
these
chance
to watch and Correct article usage
a chance
museum
may louse Fix the agreement mistake
museums
thier
frequent Correct your spelling
their
coutomers
. By imposing heavy taxation many poor people can't make to Correct your spelling
customers
visit
these Use synonyms
museums
, because their earnings are very low and unable to pay $30 for each person. Another negative point is the explorers who Use synonyms
visit
heritage Use synonyms
centures
regularly can stop going to these Correct your spelling
centuries
dentures
places
. Use synonyms
This
leads to Linking Words
permanent
closure of certain Add an article
the permanent
a permanent
centers
. Change the spelling
centres
For instance
, A survey on Linking Words
museums
shows that most of the high priced Use synonyms
museums
are moving towards shutdowns, because of Use synonyms
reduction
in tourist count to those Correct article usage
the reduction
places
.
In conclusion, They are some benefits of high entry prices, but the disadvantages overweigh the positive points of Use synonyms
museums
Use synonyms
charges
. Use synonyms
Thus
, my suggestion is that the government and some charity organizations Linking Words
sholud
take an initiative and support these Correct your spelling
should
place
to run regularly.Fix the agreement mistake
places
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