The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and

how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
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In the presented diagram, the
cement
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-making procedure is illustrated and can be accomplished in 5 steps,
along with
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how it can be used to produce concrete for building purposes. The first step of
this
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manufacturing process involves grinding raw materials,
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while
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which
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its
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apply
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result
is
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in
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the package of
cement
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. The initial stage of the process begins when limestone and clay are ground into a powder form via two-cylinder crushers. The powder of two different materials is
then
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blended in the mixture before sending it through the rotating heater.
After
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this
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, it is
being
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ground again by the grinder to be more powder-like. Once everything has been completed, the
last
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step is to pack
cement
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into the bags.
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,
cement
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is needed in order to produce concrete which is used in the building industry. In order to get concrete production, 15%
of
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apply
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cement
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is required
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10%
of
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or
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10% of clear water, 25% of sand, and 50% of gravel.
This
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is followed by feeding everything together in the concrete mixer and getting the concrete ready for construction purposes.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "along with".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cement with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • construction
  • cement-making
  • raw materials
  • crushing
  • mixing
  • heating
  • grinding
  • cement powder
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • concrete
  • versatility
  • strength
  • aggregate
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