Nowadays, some business face problems with the new employees who are just finished their education and may lack interpersonal skills such as the ability to work in a team. What do you think is the main cause of the problem? How can it be solved?

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These days, the universal issue of companies have to face new staff who have just graduated college and have difficulty adapting to
teamwork
because they have had limited social abilities.
This
essay is going to discuss what caused
this
issue and how it can be addressed by some methods. There are some reasons causing the graduated students to have interpersonal disabilities in
teamwork
, like the shyness
persionality
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personality
personally
, not enough experience and
nervous
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in the new work environment.
However
, I believe the most
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facter
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factor
faster
is nowadays' the rapidly
technologe
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technology
development, people
overwrem
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overwhelm
get in use the internet to get in touch to other's,
such
as using message
instead
for face talking. It limited people get
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a real conversation
thus
lead people
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poor interpersonal skills in a real life. To solve
this
problem, I think education and training are the main
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strategy
strategies
.
Firstly
, the universities could give some
guide
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and activities, like how overuse internet harmful and limited extrovert
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personality
and some team
work study
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to help the
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papers
paupers
who will graduate soon.
Secondly
, if companies can provide
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training for the new
teammenber
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team member
, it could help them to increase
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and social skills in the
teamwork
.
For instance
, some organizations in Hong Kong
provie
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provide
some
teamwork
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games
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for their employees when they establish a
goup
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group
of staff to be a new team.
This
kind of training can open up staff's interpersonal skills successfully. To sum up, there are several main factors cause new
teammenbers
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team members
lack of interpersonal abilities,
however
,
this
matter can be addressed by
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colleges's
college's
educate and
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companies
training.
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