International community should act immediately to encourage countries to reduce the consumption of fossil fuels, such as oil and gas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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since the industrial revolution. Some people argue that actions should be taken by

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community at once in order to decline the use of fossil

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the world. In my view, I totally agree with

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claim.

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, the substances produced from the burning of fossil

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great contributor to global warming.

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is because that consuming a large amount of oil and gas can cause greenhouse gas,

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as carbon dioxide, which can lead to a significant rise

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temperature on the earth.

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of global warming, the sea level suffers from a growth year by year, so that some of the low-terrain districts may be flooded by the sea, which can lead to the decrease of habitats and growing intensive population.

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, the rising demand

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burning fossil

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nowadays

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been polluting the environment to a large extent.

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, some poison gas can be released

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the air by cars and bring about many respiratory diseases to city dwellers,

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as lung cancer.

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, these gases are easy to penetrate into the soil and damage the quality of soil,

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the decreasing productivity of crops.

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, the biodiversity of sea creatures

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pollution.

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, the shortage of fossil

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is a cross-world and

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urgent issue, which should be tackled with the efforts made by international cooperation. There are many renewable resources introduced to the world these days to replace

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, electric vehicles, but it is fairly not enough to cover the demand of production activities in people’s life. In conclusion, it is really an international and rather urgent task need to be addressed by

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governments and inhabitants all over the world. In my opinion, when communities from different countries collaborate together, the awareness of reducing

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of fossil

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for people would be strengthened.