Unemployment has become an increasing problem in the recent past. What factors contribute to an increase in unemployment and what steps can be taken to solve the problem?

During the
last
5 to 10 years, unemployment has become a great question to many countries as it is on an upward trend.
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explain the factors contributing to the increase and will provide what action we should take to reduce it. While I was searching on Google I noticed that there are many reasons contributing to
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issue. If we carefully examine the above factors, we should be able to find solutions to each and every item. Taking
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point into consideration, we need system automation and developments but
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we cannot bypass the human touch in everything. Let me give an example. Interactive voice response (IVR) is a very famous technology, but Customers still waiting for operators’ assistance. We have to encourage many people to start their own business in order to provide many job opportunities, which in return will in result economic growth. The government
that is
in power should provide proper infrastructure and a helping hand to these kinds of new Businessmen's to grow their businesses. It is always better to restructure our education and training to align with the labour market. ,
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Currently
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we see a huge job demand in some areas
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as plumbing, carpentering work and automobile workers etc... These skills are not being taught in a classroom. One of the recent surveys has proved that many skilled individuals are migrating to other countries for better prospects. In
this
,case the governments in
such
countries should have a proper process to take care of these experts and give them more benefits. All in ,all I believe, though there is an increase in unemployment we can always look for resolutions. Especially the Government authorities should be vigilant and provide suitable solutions timely and effectively.
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