Topic 2: foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is proposed that cultural and historical sites should charge more

fees

to tourists from overseas than indigenous

people

. In my opinion, I completely disagree with

this

view and I believe that

this

practice is not conducive. Granted, there are some arguments why proponents advocate for higher

fees

among foreign tourists rather than local

visitors

. The key reason for

this

tendency is that it is believed that dwellers in these areas greatly contribute to the constructions and preservation of ancient

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heritages. A lot of efforts and time are devoted to conserving with the aim to perpetuate historical spots in primitive states; it is,

therefore

, unjustifiable if they have to pay

fees

for their visits. By

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, new contemporary comers who only travel to these destinations once or several times inadvertently take a heavy toll on the surroundings as well as

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displayed in these areas, let alone defend them.

As a result

, they conclude that strangers have to pay more than local

people

.

However

, I would contend that if

this

practice is applied, it is unwise because

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the long run,

this

is not beneficial and even has an adverse bearing. Indeed, authorities can gain financial benefits when new

visitors

from other countries are willing to pay higher

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entrance

fees

. The more

visitors

they have, the more budgets they can achieve.

Nevertheless

, it turns out to be worse when foreign

visitors

know the truth that their payments are larger compared to local

people

. The obvious disadvantage can be seen from

this

situation that unfair and unwelcoming senses are arising among them, leading to no desire to come back

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places, giving rise to the decline of the number of international tourists in the near future.

This

,

hence

, causes a colossal toll on finance, even it can be worse

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foreigners will have bad images

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people

in those countries, leaving undesirable impressions on

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community. In conclusion,

although

there is solid justification to prove that

fees

for historic and cultural sites should be higher to stranger

visitors

, I am more convinced that

this

practice is not an ideal solution and it can be detrimental to both the economy and global status in a long time.