Topic 2: foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is proposed that cultural and historical sites should charge more

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to tourists from overseas than indigenous

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. In my opinion, I completely disagree with

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view and I believe that

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practice is not conducive. Granted, there are some arguments why proponents advocate for higher

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among foreign tourists rather than local

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. The key reason for

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tendency is that it is believed that dwellers in these areas greatly contribute to the constructions and preservation of ancient

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heritages. A lot of efforts and time are devoted to conserving with the aim to perpetuate historical spots in primitive states; it is,

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, unjustifiable if they have to pay

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for their visits. By

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, new contemporary comers who only travel to these destinations once or several times inadvertently take a heavy toll on the surroundings as well as

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displayed in these areas, let alone defend them.

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, they conclude that strangers have to pay more than local

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practice is applied, it is unwise because

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the long run,

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is not beneficial and even has an adverse bearing. Indeed, authorities can gain financial benefits when new

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from other countries are willing to pay higher

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entrance

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. The more

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they have, the more budgets they can achieve.

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, it turns out to be worse when foreign

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know the truth that their payments are larger compared to local

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. The obvious disadvantage can be seen from

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situation that unfair and unwelcoming senses are arising among them, leading to no desire to come back

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places, giving rise to the decline of the number of international tourists in the near future.

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, causes a colossal toll on finance, even it can be worse

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foreigners will have bad images

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in those countries, leaving undesirable impressions on

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community. In conclusion,

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there is solid justification to prove that

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for historic and cultural sites should be higher to stranger

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, I am more convinced that

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practice is not an ideal solution and it can be detrimental to both the economy and global status in a long time.