Nowdays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure . Some belive this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to . To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Ms Aline Beckinsale The Pharmacist
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Community Centre Brookwille 8431 12/02/2019 Dear Ms Beckinsale Re:Mr Sean William Age:72 years I am writing to update on Mr William, who requires your assistance in using
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, as he seemed to have a confusion regarding the dosage and method of using Voice HFA
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, which containing a built-in dose with counter and spacer. As per the GP's order he has been taking two puffs under assistance regularly. Currently, he seemed to have difficulties in breathing yet
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. Should you have any queries, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours sincerely District Nurse
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable tourism
  • cultural homogenization
  • ecological footprint
  • carrying capacity
  • economic diversification
  • heritage sites
  • cross-cultural
  • hospitality industry
  • biodiversity conservation
  • gentrification
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