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In many countries people have to pay for medical care but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#countries #people #care #think #service #government
I would like to keep an open mind on the notion that states that healthcare should a
service
that is
 free. The reason
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 me not taking
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 and sitting on the fence will be stated in
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 paragraph. I truly applaud the kind gesture of the government making medical care a free
service
 for the
people
. Because everyone from any walk of life
have
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it’s
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 right to be treated when ill and should be nurtured back to health. Nobody life should perish due to the fact that medical bills are
sky rocketing
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.
However
 when the bills are tremendously high
people
 tend to search for the alternative way of curing illnesses,eg using essential oils to treat sinus infections which have zero effectiveness against the cause. Or the most common thing of taking antibiotics without knowing if it’s either viral or bacterial infection these
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 tend to do more harm than good leading to more complication
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 the long run. The worse of cases is believing in pseudoscience which sounds true but
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 it isn’t the example would be during the pandemic there has been
a
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speculation that drinking pure ethanol would kill the COVID viruses. All these cases are the product of
people
 not having
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proper access to healthcare or simply not being able to effort to see the proper professional.
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 we have to
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bare
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 in mind that there is bad in every good because making health care a free
service
this
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put tension on
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every taxpayer. Because there must be
a
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funding in order to treat the patients. And the income of the government income
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 on
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tax money. So there might be a possibility that
people
 have to pay more tax than it
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 to. So
people
 have to work twice as hard
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 the usual living and basic amenities will
also
 increase making lower class citizens unable to effort. I believe that healthcare might be free but basic needs aren’t.
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 important thing is the quality of the
service
 given to the patient. Who is going to monitor the quality of the
service
.
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a
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free health care with bad quality will increase the toll of
deceased
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. And
finally
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 we cannot forget the likelihood of the system failing because there isn’t a sufficient fund to support the
people
 in need To conclude as I have mentioned
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 the previous paragraph I prefer to side on the fence making sure every possible outcome is properly accessed before making it official.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal coverage
  • equity
  • fundamental human right
  • out-of-pocket expenses
  • financial hardship
  • preventative measures
  • social contract
  • quality of care
  • high demand
  • limited resources
  • tax implications
  • budget priorities
  • universal healthcare systems
  • public health
  • disease burden
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