In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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of the country, citizens have to pay in order to be able to access

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facilities.

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, others believe that the

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sector should be free for everyone. As for me, I partially concur with

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notion and that the reasons will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. The

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and foremost reason is that people should be able to seek medical

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and consultations regardless of their financial background.

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, in the United Kingdom, the NHS

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system is free for everyone.

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, diseases that could be cured are treated even if they don't have enough

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to cover the medication course, unlike other areas where people die as they couldn't afford to pay for the full course of medication.

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save peoples' lives but

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encourage people to seek professional

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and visit clinics without any hesitation. So, it is a great opportunity for citizens to maintain their health condition.

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, it can have a massive strain on the nations'

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is because, the government will have to invest a great sum of money

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the

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sector for it to be free which left a modicum amount of

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for other essential sectors

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as transportation, entertainment and so on.

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, it can be debated that devoting

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of time, effort and money

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only one sector can block the way for the development of other areas. To sum up, every case has its own benefits and downsides together with the solutions.

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, the country's authorities can provide a free of charge consultation if the nation still

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the remaining

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to fund in other public places.

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Topic Vocabulary:

universal healthcare
financial distress
healthcare inequalities
preventive care
medical check-ups
healthcare system
government budgets
economic stability
quality of care
overburdened healthcare facilities
efficient management
sustainability
wastage of resources

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