WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

In
majority
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of the country, citizens have to pay in order to be able to access
wide
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range of
healthcare
facilities.
However
, others believe that the
healthcare
sector should be free for everyone. As for me, I partially concur with
this
notion and that the reasons will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. The
first
and foremost reason is that people should be able to seek medical
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advice
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and consultations regardless of their financial background.
For instance
, in the United Kingdom, the NHS
healthcare
system is free for everyone.
Consequently
, diseases that could be cured are treated even if they don't have enough
budget
to cover the medication course, unlike other areas where people die as they couldn't afford to pay for the full course of medication.
This
not only
help
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save peoples' lives but
also
encourage people to seek professional
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advice
advices
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and visit clinics without any hesitation. So, it is a great opportunity for citizens to maintain their health condition.
Nonetheless
, it can have a massive strain on the nations'
budget
.
This
is because, the government will have to invest a great sum of money
on
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the
healthcare
sector for it to be free which left a modicum amount of
budget
for other essential sectors
such
as transportation, entertainment and so on.
Therefore
, it can be debated that devoting
myriad
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of time, effort and money
on
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only one sector can block the way for the development of other areas. To sum up, every case has its own benefits and downsides together with the solutions.
Consequently
, the country's authorities can provide a free of charge consultation if the nation still
have
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the remaining
budget
to fund in other public places.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal healthcare
  • financial distress
  • healthcare inequalities
  • preventive care
  • medical check-ups
  • healthcare system
  • government budgets
  • economic stability
  • quality of care
  • overburdened healthcare facilities
  • efficient management
  • sustainability
  • wastage of resources
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