Internet crime is increasing rapidly as more and more people are using internet to make financial transactions. What can be done to tackle this problem?
What qualities would the perfect
parents
have ? In my opinion, I think that there are three things the perfect parents
would have is firstly
, Love which everyone Replace the adverb
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parents
always would love you without reason or expectation. They just love you and give you everything what
they have Change the word
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Secondly
, Encouragement which the parents
give you when you have some failure in your career path or work. You just stand up and come home , you will receive sympathy from your parents
and they don't ever ask you why do you fail or what did you do. It makes you easily overcome to
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Finally
, parenting is not lease
important because anything Correct your spelling
least
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they teach you to make you become who you are. Nowadays, we all have to face many problems of social life on social media and we need to know or understand clearly Change the word
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
