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These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development?

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The given graph provides information about the expenditure incurred on liquor and
drugs
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 in different years. Overall, it can be depicted that the amount of money spent on alcohol was more than
drugs
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 during given periods. As can be illustrated, In the year, 1980 people spent more and fewer funds on alcohol and
drugs
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, which was just above 180
billion
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dollars
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 and 100
billion
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dollars
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 respectively, almost similar expense was incurred in the years 1975 and 1977 on both the commodities, in the former period amount spent on liquor and
drugs
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 was just above 140
billion
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dollars
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 and almost 40
billion
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dollars
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 respectively, while in the latter term the same was 140
billion
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dollars
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 and just above 40
billion
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dollars
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.
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, expenditure incurred in the year 1985 on both the products was just above 100
billion
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dollars
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 and a bit more than 60
billion
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dollars
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.
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, in the
last
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 year money spent on alcohol and
drugs
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 was just above 140
billion
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dollars
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 and almost 100
billion
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dollars
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 respectively.
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