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Some people focus on news in their own country, while others think it is more important to be aware of international news. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #focus #news #country
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 Student Support team,  My full name is Toshpulotova 
Shoira
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, I started studying in Microverse in February and In 3 months, on May 4, I had to terminate my programme as I was hired as a Front
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 developer. Hereby I would like to inform you that I had to quit my position due to some personal reasons. I am working until the
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 of August. The experience I got working there is very valuable and now I feel quite confident in the Front
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 and the Java script. Excited to continue my studies and dive into the back
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.Can you let me know when I can get back to my studies on Microverse? I have to start from Ruby on Rails. With regards
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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