Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling Is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Over the past decades, mankind has been showing great concern towards
environment
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protection. Some part of the society believes that the major part of
waste
must be
disposed
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so that it would easily
recycled
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.
Besides
,
state
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should impose mandatory laws against the citizens not
to
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disposing
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the
waste
properly. I strongly agree with the statement, and in the following paragraphs, I will give my arguments to support my view. Recycling of the
waste
should be
combined
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effort of government and the civilians to save our community as well as
environment
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.
First
and Foremost, a strict law should be imposed. And those people who do not obey the rule should be heavily penalised.
For instance
, In India, there are many rules which are not followed by
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society unless or until they would
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penalised.
Therefore
, a fear would arise among mankind and they will be forced to follow that law.
Moreover
, If the
waste
would not be disposed
and
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recycled properly, It would cause harm to
the
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nature. If the
waste
is not biodegradable
then
it fills the landfill area.
Besides
, it gets in the water streams and pollutes the water which eventually
deteriorate
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the health of the people.
In addition
, if
this
kind of
waste
would
be burn
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,
then
it will emit harmful gases and in turn harm the whole
humankind
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. To sum it up, I certainly believe that the authority should encourage
community
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to follow that law in order to save them from the devastating consequences of not
disposing
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the
waste
more efficiently.
This
approach is completely practicable and would save our motherland.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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