Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Increasing
pollution
is one of the major environmental concerns these days. Some people opine that hike in petrol prices is a good solution to control environmental damage. In
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other measures which are efficient solutions to the latter problem will be discussed in detail in upcoming paragraphs. There are various measures which can help to reduce air
pollution
rather than increasing petrol prices.
First
and foremost is having a
pollution
check of
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,
this
is a technique in which level of
pollution
which is generated by a
vehicle
is monitored to be within the normal range. Even, while
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if an individual has not got his
vehicle
checked there must be a penalty.
Secondly
, a specific tenure could be declared
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the government for which a motor
vehicle
should be used. For an instance, if a car is more than ten years old it should be banned to run on roads.
Furthermore
, another effective method to
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control
pollution
generated by vehicles is allowing vehicles to run on alternate days.
This
method was implemented in
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in which
vehicle
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with odd numbers
were
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allowed to run on roads on
mondays
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while vehicles having an even number were used on
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.
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was used in Delhi and good results were observed as
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quality of the city was improved due to decreased motor combustion.
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, the government should allure
public
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with attractive schemes on public transport
such
as cheap tickets, suitable time-tables and so on to motivate them for its use owing to
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people will prefer to use public modes of transportation which will decrease the number of private transportation. In conclusion, other measures are more beneficial to be adopted rather than increasing the fuel prices because it will increase the expense of common man and problem will
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Discourage
  • Incentivize
  • Alternative energy
  • Public transportation
  • Lower-income
  • Carpool
  • Ride-sharing
  • Congestion
  • Urban planning
  • Pedestrian-friendly
  • Tax incentives
  • Electric and hybrid vehicles
  • Emissions standards
  • Cleaner vehicles
  • Congestion charges
  • Bicycle lanes
  • Sustainable
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